JAV: She leaned against my chest and I carried her into my room, where we could discuss things more. Dinner was nice, and we were astonished to hear Katie actually breaking her rule of silence to say the house was wonderful
. "Katie! Hey, your up early.
. That’s a blanket statement, but speaking as someone who writes and critically looks at erotica, I can say this of 90% of longform erotica writers who write only to showcase sex. So many longform erotica stories have fallen into the unfortunate trap of thinking that adding more girls for the male protagonist to sleep with is ‘advancement This is obviously one guy’s opinion, but especially if you’re starting out, you’re 30-chapter-long story that isn’t about character development, just sex, isn’t going to have to many dedicated readers sticking around for chapters ten and up.
” His voice changed. My ankles and wrists were bruised, my throat bruised, my breasts and ass whipped
. Amazing what girls will agree to when a man whispers I love yous
JAV: She leaned against my chest and I carried her into my room, where we could discuss things more. Dinner was nice, and we were astonished to hear Katie actually breaking her rule of silence to say the house was wonderful
. "Katie! Hey, your up early.
. That’s a blanket statement, but speaking as someone who writes and critically looks at erotica, I can say this of 90% of longform erotica writers who write only to showcase sex. So many longform erotica stories have fallen into the unfortunate trap of thinking that adding more girls for the male protagonist to sleep with is ‘advancement This is obviously one guy’s opinion, but especially if you’re starting out, you’re 30-chapter-long story that isn’t about character development, just sex, isn’t going to have to many dedicated readers sticking around for chapters ten and up.
” His voice changed. My ankles and wrists were bruised, my throat bruised, my breasts and ass whipped
. Amazing what girls will agree to when a man whispers I love yous
JAV: She leaned against my chest and I carried her into my room, where we could discuss things more. Dinner was nice, and we were astonished to hear Katie actually breaking her rule of silence to say the house was wonderful
. "Katie! Hey, your up early.
. That’s a blanket statement, but speaking as someone who writes and critically looks at erotica, I can say this of 90% of longform erotica writers who write only to showcase sex. So many longform erotica stories have fallen into the unfortunate trap of thinking that adding more girls for the male protagonist to sleep with is ‘advancement This is obviously one guy’s opinion, but especially if you’re starting out, you’re 30-chapter-long story that isn’t about character development, just sex, isn’t going to have to many dedicated readers sticking around for chapters ten and up.
” His voice changed. My ankles and wrists were bruised, my throat bruised, my breasts and ass whipped
. Amazing what girls will agree to when a man whispers I love yous
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