Otherwise, I frankly won’t care, although the premise isn’t bad because it’s a universal concept that a lot of readers can understand
. Figure out what that says, because it’s not that these guys ‘just don’t get the value of good stories. Everybody likes different things but you want to balance what you want to be unique (characters are good to make unique as a starter) and what you want to make more universal and relatable (the theme of your story [like ‘underdog becomes the hero’ or ‘unattractive guy finally wins the girl’] and the terminology of sex are good here)
. . I need your comments and feedback
Otherwise, I frankly won’t care, although the premise isn’t bad because it’s a universal concept that a lot of readers can understand
. Figure out what that says, because it’s not that these guys ‘just don’t get the value of good stories. Everybody likes different things but you want to balance what you want to be unique (characters are good to make unique as a starter) and what you want to make more universal and relatable (the theme of your story [like ‘underdog becomes the hero’ or ‘unattractive guy finally wins the girl’] and the terminology of sex are good here)
. . I need your comments and feedback
Otherwise, I frankly won’t care, although the premise isn’t bad because it’s a universal concept that a lot of readers can understand
. Figure out what that says, because it’s not that these guys ‘just don’t get the value of good stories. Everybody likes different things but you want to balance what you want to be unique (characters are good to make unique as a starter) and what you want to make more universal and relatable (the theme of your story [like ‘underdog becomes the hero’ or ‘unattractive guy finally wins the girl’] and the terminology of sex are good here)
. . I need your comments and feedback
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